With YOU
Oh what have you done to my thoughts?
Every second I think about you
Without you I'd be distraught
People like you are special and few
Without you I'd be distraught
People like you are special and few
Your divine smile makes my heart melt
Your green colored eyes make me go blank
True love is what I felt
Number one is your rank
I want to dance with you all night
Never let go
I love you that's right
It's hard I know
With you I want to be
With you I want to be
Forever you and me
5 comments:
dana! truely magical :D a true poet actually feels with what he/she is writing and you achieved that!! great sonnet xxx
ooooooh is someone in loooove?? who is the lucky green-eyed boy??
Just joking...i guess you just felt like writing a poem with love as the theme ,,,, you really did achieve that!
Dana, by any chance, are you in love? I really felt tyour emotions to the audience obvious and clear...
You made your idea of staying forever with the person vry clear especially in your last couple...I realy like that part, you summarize the rest of the sonnet really well!
Dana K ! i thought i commented on this one! i know this poem by heart now btw cos you read it to me over and over again, and i loved it every time ! It's simple, straightforward and truly coming out of the heart:) if ur ever inlove, the guy better be worth such peoms ! hehe jk my love ! two thumbs up !
I wonder if this sonnet was intended for anyone in particular, like Beyhan said. A film star, rock star or pop idol, perhaps? It's curious...
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